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PostSubject: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeMon Nov 01, 2010 6:39 am

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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeMon Nov 01, 2010 11:02 am

This is for Shads book i guess? Looks pretty cool anyway cheers cheers
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeMon Nov 01, 2010 5:29 pm

uve done it again!
very good piece moonie =)
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeMon Nov 01, 2010 5:41 pm

oyoy ... me again ... of course it's good, but ...

1) isnt there a dot missing for "R.P.G."
2) girls hair should be blond or red to achieve more contrast to the horses neck
3) horse's eyes are kinda "unsharp" to me with the red glowing
4) not sure about the blue pants of the wolfman, but they dont seem to fit to the surrounding anyhow,
color is too bright and details' resolution too low ... at least the pale shadow guy loses attraction, cause
the birhg tblue springs into one's eyes too much
5) below person's feet is a lot of space unused ... so, maybe if they are dragged more down,
they would have place to become taller and more significant by that. also might give more room for
the pale shadow guy.

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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeMon Nov 01, 2010 6:53 pm

Not me this time this is Shads I only hosted it


These Characters are out of shads mind, they are how they are described in the book,
the horse is not a horse its a Nightmare they dont got eyes just glow,
the ghost is comming out of the pack and cross bones on the floor thats how it happens more or less in UO,
There is no dot after the G in RPG... OR R.P.G because there is not another word follwing g like F.B.I

The feet are on the floor the black below is shadow to frame it, but it's his call he did it Very Happy the ww is spot on as described in said bookie.


The reson for it to be on R.B as one of mine, is purely for advertising, he did not want his name on it or near it, and wants me to
publisise it as in R.B zazzle etc and a few others, so for R.B purposes I had to put it under my artwork.
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeMon Nov 01, 2010 8:21 pm

The back of the book, yes yes lol that is an I.T Gnome thats what they really look like, including sillias.


http://www.redbubble.com/people/moonlake/art/6200344-1-back-of-book-with-i-t-gnome
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeMon Nov 01, 2010 8:29 pm

That actually sounds pretty cool, I want more!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeMon Nov 01, 2010 8:35 pm

Well, the cover chars are all pretty much exactly as I've had them in my mind whilst writing and as they are described. Considering the restrictions of the clothing etc available for Poser, i'm really pleased with the cover pic.

Obviously, parts of it will make more sense to anyone reading it etc.

I've decided to place it with a new company that uses a print on demand system as that seems to be the easiest way to go. For a just 7 quid a month it's made available on Amazon as well as via their own links etc, as well as readable online or as an ebook, and issued its own ISBN number, with no other expense to myself. At least this way if a few folks like it they might buy it. Not too worried though TBH, I'm just so pleased that I set out to write it and actually did it. Plus it was a lot of fun, so much so that I've started another! Well it keeps me busy and out of trouble.

Its kinda cool that the publishing world is changing just like the other entertainment industries and you can now publish and promote yourself without being reliant on a corporate agent or have to spend a fortune getting your work printed yourself.

I'm no great writer but hopefully it's just a fun adventure and read as such. Once it's edited properly and online, i'll post a linky for anyone who wants to check it out.
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeMon Nov 01, 2010 11:26 pm

*lights a cigge, opens a bag of chips and sits down to wait for the link*
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeTue Nov 02, 2010 1:16 am

I think I might finally WANT to read a book Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeWed Nov 03, 2010 2:47 pm

**assisting Nandy also with the smoking AND waiting for the linky**

google doesnt help yet ... ;-( ...
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeWed Nov 03, 2010 3:49 pm

just a day or two more hopefully cheers cheers
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeThu Nov 04, 2010 4:40 am

Ta Daaaaaaa !!!!

Here we go.....

http://www.completelynovel.com/books/123175

Anyone who wants to can read it for free on the site, but if ya do, would be really cool if you could 'like' it etc and maybe do a little review as the more popular it gets, the more exposure they give it. Cheers !!!
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeThu Nov 04, 2010 6:11 am

Big congratz. Looks very good so far. I didn't know you were even writing a book. I loose my train of thought if I try to write a book. I will read yours. Its a very good thing we see both of the wolves hands on the cover because the guys mouth looks like something might be entering his rear end. lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeSat Nov 06, 2010 2:13 am

Thanks Fred, and to all the other guys who checked it out too.

Now, I just need to make Malt an Pred my Facebook PR Biatches ............. imabadboy

Ohhh.....and if anyone finds any grammar, spelling errors, feel free to PM me, I can still make a final edit for corrections.
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeSat Nov 06, 2010 3:06 am

Page 17 line 15 "...would visit such a sit."
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeSat Nov 06, 2010 7:31 pm

Cheers fred an Ralf, corrections made.
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeMon Nov 08, 2010 1:07 am

Did I miss something... have you decided to cut your hair and get a job as an author Shad??? What a Face What a Face What a Face
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeMon Nov 08, 2010 3:01 am

well, apart from cutting my hair and getting a job, i'm giving the third part a go affraid

Although I really do need a haircut Suspect
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeFri Nov 12, 2010 9:21 pm

Book read. Very nice. When do we get the next ?
Can't help with typo as I'm notoriously bad at that...except why right "manna", for mana ?

Keep on writing Yes Yes
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeSat Nov 13, 2010 6:49 am

haha that would be complete ignorance on my part as to the correct spelling Embarassed

Thanks for taking the time to read it Term, next one should be sometime 2011, I just finished the first two chapters cheers
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeSun Nov 14, 2010 3:55 pm

the sentence formation and the typos I cant help with,

very well done, a good read indeed
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PostSubject: Re: Getting there bit by bit   Getting there bit by bit Icon_minitimeSun Nov 14, 2010 4:00 pm

forgot who i was...lol.... Embarassed

well done enjoyed the read very much

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