Confused....As Usual...

Ok so ya, I was listening to music from my collection and I ran across an old favorite. It's called 'Our House' by a british band called Madness. I got the insane idea to make a remix, only with my own lyrics and my god awful raise the dead voice of mine, plus some sfx. I'm kinda pleased with it, It sounds alright I just wish someone who could sing would rerecord it. I got the instumental version too s'how I made the remix.

MY confusion is this. The song is about "our guild," Thats the name of the song and its about us members. I couldnt include everyone in it but I tried to fit all the people I see daily in. The lyrics poke fun at each other, nothing mean I dont think. But I dont want to offend or hurt anyone's feelings. I just used daily observations and peoples own comments. Its not meant to make fun of anyone personally even though its about all of us. I just descided I'd make a funny spoof. I'll post the lyrics below, and if everyone is ok with it I'll figure a way to get the actual mp3 song for you all to listen too with my wonderful voice. Please let me know if I've stepped on anyones toes, this was done for pure humor and nothing more. Thanks.

'Our Guild'
Remix by Casull
To the tune of 'Our House' by Madness

[ ] = sound effects or voices

Shadow forms our next event [twilightzone music]
Moonie has a Welsh accent
Kedon's planning our evening raid
Pred is playing in his sleep [keyboard typing]
Wiseman's got a date to keep
But he must stay

Our guild, is the greatest of Telon
Our guild, is the greatest of

Our guild it has a crowd
There's aways something happening
And it's usually Casull being loud [Casull talking]
Our members are so guild-proud
Nothing ever slows us down
But profanity is not allowed [Censored Argument]

Our guild, is the greatest of Telon
Our guild, is the greatest of
Our guild, is the greatest of Telon
Our guild, in the greatest of

Shadow gets up late to game [Yawn]
So does Moon it's such a shame
But Pred and Malt must goto school [Awwww]
Cynamoon drinks his coffee [Slurping Coffee]
Casull starts his morning talking
Its so annoying [Casull talking to himself, again]

[Instrumental Interlude]

Our guild, is the greatest of Telon
Our guild, in the greatest of


I remember way back then when
Everyone was true and when
They would have such a very good time
Such a fine time
Such a happy time
And I remember how they'd play
Simply waste the day away
But then it came
That growing pain in the ass ["You know who I'm talking about"]
That never passed

Vici always seems quite content
Kara has a thick Irish accent
Budwiser live way far up in Cancada
Must be fun having a "LEGAL" drug
Nandy's afraid of spider and bugs
She screams and runs [Casull screams: "Just kidding Nandy I Swear! Ahhhhhhh! *Splash*]

Our guild, is the greatest of Telon
Our guild, is the greatest of Telon
Our guild, is the greatest of Telon
Our guild, is the greatest of
Our guild, is has a castle and a fleet
Our guild, is here when we're not asleep
Our guild, is the greatest of Telon

Now I know some of the lines are corny or dumb but I started the project at about 8pm and I finished the final track at about 430am, its now 442am and Im tired and have a terrible headache. I dont know about you all but its hard to think of a great lyric for every line in a song, especially when your trying to fit it to a prexisting song. Anyways, if you have 'Our House' on your pc, cd, record, etc. you can play it and read my lyrics. You'll have to sing really fast in the middle. I know you'll notice Ive put myself in there 3 or 4 times. I was mostly making a song to poke fun of my excessive talking and whining. So dont get the idea that I think Im so wonderful cause Im far from it. And since I wrote it I can say what I want about myself as much as I want. Just be lucky if you got mentioned!!!! j/k hehe.

Feedback wanted....

Awsome Cas

The only sad thing is that I remember the original when it first came out. ( Moonie was actually a big madness fan lol)

Interesting but sad fact : Suggs, the lead singer of madness is now advertising fish fingers on TV. They were so edgy in their day too. (madness, not fish fingers).

hahaha! that's great cas just one thing, Kara has a scottish accent doesn't she?

well to all who heard its actually Canadian but when I am embibing or angry the brogue rolls out, lol or dying?


well done indeed

dying :queen:

oh shoot! i forgot it was scottish. one of my best friends irl, niel, is scottish and thows a hissy fit when anyone calls him british, even though he was sas, he still protects his heritage, even if it means a fist in the face for the poor individual. anyways, im always thinking scottish, and so i force myself to remember people are from wells or ireland (murgos), so i got confused, as the topic states. i key thinking kara was from scotland but i said no no no, niel is from scotland, she has to be from irland! anyways sorry for the mess up, cant really fix it now though, oh and sorry for mispelling your countries, i cant spell good.

Shad wrote:

Awsome Cas

The only sad thing is that I remember the original when it first came out. ( Moonie was actually a big madness fan lol)

Interesting but sad fact : Suggs, the lead singer of madness is now advertising fish fingers on TV. They were so edgy in their day too. (madness, not fish fingers).

as a matter of fact i myself have followed suggs. yeah i know its sad he's doing comercials now. but so is william shackner (captain kirk), comercials for geico, expedia.com, and narrorating documentaries. shackner isnt the only one either, there are many. even ozzy ozborn is doing comercials for wolrd of warcraft now.

but madness had a good time in their day, especially over there, and to me thats good enough. the music video of 'our house' is so lame but hey, its low-budget, and poor'y rehersed. and suggs is the only one wearing a descent outfit.

karalee wrote:

well to all who heard its actually Canadian but when I am embibing or angry the brogue rolls out, lol or dying?


well done indeed

dying :queen:

i was origionally going to have a line about you (kara), and bud talking about the weather, since you both do that. "you keep your -40 there and dont send it down here" or something like that. but i couldnt find a good, short, way to mention it really. so sorry though.

And where i am in your song? lol

No...its awesome....very funny

im sorry safi, like i said i couldnt put everyone in, so i chose the people that i saw almost every day of the week. i did think of you and murgos, kriss, heth, and many others.